Writing sample

This week we have been doing writing samples to see what level we are in writing . If you don't know what they are keep reading. Writing samples are a choice between a narrative and a recount. Please read my paragraph.

Hello and welcome to the monster truck rally my name is Jon and my name is Jon!Get ready for a bashing and a crashing day. The first round is a stunt round were two drivers have to do there best stunts.It’s simple the audience vote and the most votes for two drivers are picked to go in all the  rounds. Ok the two drivers are (drum roll) Shane O'Connell and Barry Ferguson. Wow! Jon this is unbelievable the top two drivers are battling for the cup of monster trucks.THREE,TWO,ONE GO yells the crowd.

There of Shane starts with a ford flip triple jump then Barry Ferguson does a loopty loop back flip.(Hers a tip if you're going to this you'll need the right gear. ) Beep goes the buzzer as the clock runs out.